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Saving the City: Sans-Spandex

WE’RE BACK!

What a month it was!  Laura and I both set personal bests for words written and words written in a single day.  Our region had a banner year for winners, and a grand time at all the events put on by our awesome team.  And we’re FULL of ideas for the new year!  Thanks to those of you who sent us good wishes, and congrats to all the winners among you!  And if you have no idea what I’m talking about, nanowrimo.org is the place to start.  😉

4 responses to “First Date V”

  1. Dreadogastus says:

    This is all going so well for our young… friends. Why do I have the feeling that something BAD will happen?
    Oh, right! It’s an action & humor webcomic.

  2. Hinoron says:

    Man, I got almost to the end of the page before I realized I was meant to be reading those dialogue balloons as a back-and-forth exchange. Having them in completely separate panels with no connection at all is misleading.

    Might I suggest having the balloons overlap the center panel division from both sides, encouraging readers to read down the centre instead of one panel at a time like comics have trained us to do for almost a century?

  3. Storel says:

    Or maybe having a zig-zag border between the frames would have helped — that’s a common convention for opposite sides of a phone call.

  4. Storel says:

    Doing an archive reread, just have to say I love this line: “Gotta go. Don’t want her to think I’m being nefarious.”

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