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Saving the City: Sans-Spandex

3 responses to “First Date V”

  1. Dreadogastus says:

    This is all going so well for our young… friends. Why do I have the feeling that something BAD will happen?
    Oh, right! It’s an action & humor webcomic.

  2. Hinoron says:

    Man, I got almost to the end of the page before I realized I was meant to be reading those dialogue balloons as a back-and-forth exchange. Having them in completely separate panels with no connection at all is misleading.

    Might I suggest having the balloons overlap the center panel division from both sides, encouraging readers to read down the centre instead of one panel at a time like comics have trained us to do for almost a century?

  3. Storel says:

    Or maybe having a zig-zag border between the frames would have helped — that’s a common convention for opposite sides of a phone call.

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